Check out my new tune! It's got a posthardcore/metalcore feel

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Isotropy
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https://soundcloud.com/brian-wright-1/sing-a-new-one-cease-17-wip?in=brian-wright-1/sets/cease-2017-the-scratch

Let me know what you think! Part of an upcoming album.

All critiques welcome!

SerenobraK
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I assume it's a pre-master mix without the voice track.
Beautiful drum snare and the mix is good.
The intro I find it too long, the mid section riffing I like its 'Intervals' influence, but I think you should improve the transitions between different riffing sections to be more fluid.Wink

macmegh
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Hey this is really cool! i like all the tones you've used! Mix wise, i just think the snare drum is a bit too "in your face", i'd maybe turn the attack down on the compressor a bit, remove some of the thickness (150hz-200hz) or simply decrease the volume! rest of it sounds pretty dope! Best part: 1:30